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#ukteenchat Interview with Adam Connors
My main character, Kyle, wakes from an epileptic seizure to
find that the world is … different. People flicker in and out of sight,
buildings tremble and threaten to slip out of existence. In the ordinary world,
Kyle is still having a seizure, but his brain activity is spiking and, like a
near-death experience, it’s creating an alternative world, another version of
reality.
Kyle ends up calling it the Stillness, and the point is that
it isn’t a hallucination, it’s just a different rendering of reality. It’s not less real, it’s more real than the world we’re used to.
I wrote the opening chapter of Find Me After on the kitchen
floor, waking up after a seizure. I wanted to capture some of the fraught
energy of a seizure, that feeling of “coming back”. The few minutes after a
seizure always feels like a kind of hinterland, as if my brain is shifting
gears, as if something still has hold of my ankle and is trying to drag me
back. That’s where the story starts.
Lots! I didn’t want to write about a supernatural
“afterlife” or purgatory, I felt like that had been done before and it would be
too easy to slip into well-trodden territory. I’d been reading about this idea
in neuroscience that the brain doesn’t just experience
reality, it constructs it.
Neuroscience is going through a bit of a renaissance at the moment, new imaging
technology and data processing capability is changing the field dramatically.
Neuroscientists talk about our daily experiences as a
“controlled hallucination” and there’s a growing body of hard physical evidence
to back this up.
So I thought: if this
world is partly a hallucination, maybe a traumatised brain could construct a
different (but no less real) version of reality.
For me, that kind of background is what gives me the
confidence and level of detail I need to make the world feel real, and it opens
up lots of directions that I wouldn’t have thought of if I’d just seen the
world as something supernatural.
Jonah is by far my favourite character. He’s the main
antagonist and he’s kind of a nasty piece of work. But he’s a kind of “take
control” which Kyle can’t help but find slightly alluring. He’s a bit of a
force of nature, almost animalistic, and that is very much not me, so it was a
lot of fun to write.
Yes, definitely. I used to get really bogged down on the
first chapter (maybe the first page). I used to think: if I can just get this
right everything else will fall into place. But it never did, I just wrote and
rewrote and never got past the first 20K words.
One day I realised that the best thing I could do was write
all the way through to the end. Once I have a dirty first draft, it’s much
easier to see what the book is really
about, and then go back and write that.
I actually did the maths for my last book, The Girl Who
Broke The Sea: I figured out that I wrote about 250K words to get my 80K novel.
I basically deleted two words for every word I kept, which is much more
efficient than it felt at the time.
I haven’t checked Find Me After but I think the ratio will
be smaller.
I did an MA at City University and wrote an adult book as
part of that, but it wasn’t good enough and it didn’t find a home. Then I wrote
short-stories for a while because it was easier to fit around two young
children. When my son was about 8 or 9 I realised that I was spending all this
time writing things that he couldn’t enjoy, so I switched to middle-grade.
My first book was middle-grade and won Undiscovered Voices
and allowed me to sign with my agent. My second book started out as
middle-grade, but my editor at Scholastic pointed out that I really wanted to
write YA, I just hadn’t realised it.
He was right.
For now at least I think YA is my sweet-spot. There’s enough
freedom to build in ideas that are sufficiently sophisticated that adult
readers can enjoy them as well, but YA also doesn’t take itself too seriously,
and there’s still room to put things in that are just … cool.
Besides, my 8 year old is now 16.
I have two very, very large monitors. Vast. And I’d have
more if my desk would hold them. I like to have my writing document quite small
(laptop sized) and then about ten other windows around it with notes and
pinterest pages. I share my writing room with my partner so I can’t stick
things to the wall, so my screens are my thought palace.
Mostly a pantser. There’s a line from an old insurance
advert I always think about when I’m writing: You don’t know what you’re made of until you’ve had the stuffing
knocked out of you.
That’s mostly how I write, I knock the stuffing out of my
characters in order to figure out what they’re made of.
That said, I usually have a pretty good idea of where the
next third of the book is going and I tend to write that down in note form. The
best feeling is when the next block comes into view and something about it
surprises me. That’s when I feel like it’s probably good.
I’d love to write a follow-up to Find Me After. There’s a
lot of interesting stuff I’d like to play around with in Kyle and Jonah’s
relationship. Imagine, Kyle has always felt controlled by his epilepsy, and in
contrast Jonah is almost animalistic in his instinct to dominate the world he’s
trapped in. I think Kyle might end up a bit conflicted in that relationship.
There’s a whole science experiment going on in the Stillness
as well that needs to be finished off.
Hemingway had the right answer: “Writing is rewriting.” I go
over and over the words, I delete ruthlessly and rewrite. Every time I sit down
to write, I tend to start a page or two back and rewrite the words I wrote the
day before. I probably waste a lot of time adding and removing commas, but
being willing to rewrite so readily reminds me that the words are actually the
least important part of a book — they need to be good enough to get out of the
way and not jar the reader out of the illusion, but ideally the reader isn’t
thinking about the words, they’re thinking about the characters, and the story,
and the world.
FIND ME AFTER - Out on the 4th July from Scholastic
Paperback • 9780702331367 • £8.99 • 14+
Available from all bookshops, including: HIVE
Do check out all the other blog stops this week...
1, Could you
tell us a little bit about your YA debut, Seven Days, please?
‘Seven Days’
can probably be best described as a diverse YA romance about finding love after
loss. There’s sassy Noori who bumps into her misunderstood and troubled
counterpart, Aamir. Both have recently experienced tragedy in their lives and
are trying to figure out who they are and where they belong. While ‘Seven Days’
is about first love, the book delves into other themes such as grief, cultural identity,
and family – all told with humour.
2, Was there
anything in particular that inspired Seven Days?
I wanted to
write an unconventional love story featuring unconventional characters. Both
Noori and Aamir don’t conform to norms and their life choices reflect that.
Representation was also important to me as Noori is of mixed heritage and
Aamir’s parents are immigrants, which reflects my own upbringing in a way.
There aren’t that many YA novels out there that look at what it’s like to grow
up between different cultures. My own experience of loss also inspired me to
write about two grieving teenagers and their struggles with grief feel very
real to me.
3, Did you
need to do any research for Seven Days?
The novel
didn’t require a lot of research but there were still a few things I needed to
look up – about Lahore, the partition of India, Bollywood, and Bristol Zoo.
Frankly, it was just very random things I ended up researching. My favourite: cinnamon
gum and water bears!
4, What made
you decide to set the book across seven days?
I wanted to
write a story that is relatively fast-paced and seven days seemed perfect to
me. I also like the number seven! Fun fact: initially I wanted to name the
novel ‘Severn Days’.
5, Without
any spoilers, is there a particular scene or character you most enjoyed
writing?
I enjoyed
creating Noori’s character. She’s so bold and passionate about life despite the
heartaches she has suffered. Of course she has flaws and is convinced that her
life could be turned into a Bollywood movie, but she’s also incredibly kind and
has a generous heart. She tries to really understand her pain, using it as an
opportunity to grow. In terms of my favourite scene, I’d probably pick the
unexpected bathroom encounter between Noori and Aamir in which Noori sees more
than she bargained for.
6, Seven
Days is dual narrative, did you find one voice easier to get into than the
other?
I think it
was easier for me to write Noori’s character because she’s a teenage girl and I
very much remember what it was like to be that age! But I also had a lot of fun
writing from Aamir’s perspective and getting his voice right was key to me.
Overall I wanted to create a dual narrative that allows readers to truly
connect with both protagonists, including their relationships, conflicts, and realities
– and I do hope this comes across to readers.
7, Do you
have any writing rituals or a favourite place to write?
I’ve
developed some strange writing rituals over the years. For instance I like to
wear a special necklace and light a candle before I start a new project or a
new chapter. There’s just something calming about gazing at a flickering flame.
During a writer’s retreat a few years ago I also learned about the benefits of
meditation before starting a writing session, so that’s something I also like
to incorporate into my writing.
8, Are you a
plotter or pantser?
Definitely a
pantser! I admire writers who are plotters as I find it difficult to outline an
entire novel in advance. I will say though that being a pantser has its
benefits as it allows me to get to know the characters and the plot organically
as I write, which can be quite exciting.
9, Can you
tell us anything about what you’re currently working on, please?
I’m
currently on maternity leave so I feel my main job is changing nappies! But I
am planning to write another YA novel and although I’m a pantser I’m in the
middle of writing a rough outline for this.
10, Do you
have any writing tips or advice for other writers?
Read and write
whenever you can. Find your own style and unique voice. And most of all,
believe in yourself and your abilities. Oh, and try not to procrastinate –
easier said than done!
Book credit:
Seven Days
by Rebeka Shaid (£8.99, Walker Books) available now.
You can follow Rebeka on Instagram, and Seven Days is available now at bookshops, including Hive 📚
I've recently completed a sample for my first YA Horror graphic novel. This has been a great process to bring my writing and art together. I've been exploring new techniques and having fun creating some new illustrations including a new self-portrait, here's a few samples...
I have really enjoyed running my previous two WRITING CHAPTER BOOKS courses, so I will be running another from Monday 5th February.
I'm the author of the Autumn Moonbeam chapter book series, and the younger reader book - Mega Merle and the Mega Mystery. I have been editing and mentoring other writers for the best part of a decade now, and love being able to share things I've learnt about writing for children and the children's writing industry.
I have a special love of writing younger fiction, and I'm really excited to share that passion for fun fiction with other writers.
The Writing Chapter Books course will be Slack based to make is more accessible and flexible for people to attend when it's convenient to them. Including the weekly live session, where people can join in during that hour or throughout the week or beyond, when it best fits your routine and day to day life.
There will be weekly handouts, plenty of writing exercises, inspiration and weekly discussions that you can join in or add to in your own time. The handouts and the Slack group will remain open after the six weeks for those on the course to access.
A few testimonials from writers on the previous courses:
Writing Chapter Books with Emma Finlayson-Palmer is brilliant. After 6 weeks, I have a clearer understanding of this niche area of children's publishing and a solid story idea to build on. The course is well structured to help participants generate compelling characters, playful plots and wonderful worlds to weave them altogether in. The exercises in the live workshops are helpful and Emma is generous with her time and knowledge, answering our many questions and providing supportive resources. I'm thankful to Emma and the other writers - it's a fantastic course and I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone curious about creating chapter books.
- Tracy Bullock
I really enjoyed this accessible and informative course that Emma provided. The information was superior and I felt that I learnt everything I needed to know about chapter books.
- Angel Dike
Wonderful children’s writing course. An abundance of material and interaction. Thank you so much Emma, I’ve been plotting & writing daily.
- Sharon Hynes
This course was fabulous. Emma gave us SO much information, which was super helpful. Emma was also extremely quick to reply to any questions, which really helped (even outside of the course times). I liked the way the days of the course varied from week to week. I really can't recommend Emma and this course highly enough.
- Tara Potter
Seasons of Mist and Writing Fruitfulness
Today is Monday the first of January 2024 – It’s always odd
writing the date for the first time in a new year. I dare say I’ll spend the coming
weeks still writing 23 rather than 24, in much the same way I spend the weeks
after the clocks going forward or backwards by an hour saying: “It would have
been… INSERT TIME HERE.”
When the clocks last went forward, October 2023, it marked
the change from Autumn to Winter in many ways, but also plunged the days into
further darkness. I try to see the shorter daylight hours as cosy times to
snuggle up at home of an evening – but in reality, I struggle to adjust and
hate waking in darkness and my children coming home from school when night has
already arrived.
But, as we are now past the Winter Solstice, and the
shortest day of the year in terms of daylight hours, it feels as though I am
slowly tiptoeing my way back to lighter days, and the happiness I feel as
Spring approaches.
Spring is my favourite time of year – I love the crisp,
fresh days, when it’s still chilly but the sun is bright and bringing a little
more warmth – birds are busy building nests, buds are bursting, and new life is
blooming all around.
I love nature, and I always try to bring it into my writing.
Whilst the seasons will always come and go, and with them all manner of
changes, there is always beauty and inspiration to be found in the world around
us. So, even on the darkest of days, both in terms of day versus night, or the
darkness of what life has in store, I will look to nature, and spend time
outside letting it inspire and heal me, and for it to recharge my creative
battery.
I’ll leave this post with a link to a poem I have loved
since my teens and one that inspired the title of my post – a poem that feels
fitting given the subject matter and themes explored – Ode to Autumn by John
Keats, I hope you enjoy it either in reading or listening to the audio available at the link, and find peace and inspiration in the beauty of
nature around you.
To Autumn by John Keats | Poetry Foundation